Romeo and Juliet

Shakespeare's ending I thought was fine. They were to reckleless, played with fire and got burned. An alternated ending would sound strange.... Well okay I don't really know where to start but here it is:

Cast of Characters:
Romeo
Juliet
Frair
Paris
Balthasar

In the tomb where Juliet lays.
Romeo enters: Devastated Oh, Juliet why are you so fair... etc.
He opens the elixir.

Juliet: slowly moves. croaking Dear Romeo, where art thou?

Romeo: dumbstruck Here my love! But wh-

Frair: comes in out of breath No time to explain we must move out quick!

They rush out and is stopped by Paris.

Paris: You fiend! What socery do you make!?

Romeo: Paris! Dear friend, do step out of the way.

Paris: No! I rathe- bang

Balthasar: Come sire your horse awaits!

Romeo: Thankyou my dear friend!

Frair: Stay on and don't stop till you are in a safe place!
They bolt away

End of Scene

Epilouge
After everything cooled off the Frair explained everything to the parents. They were extremly mad but after a year or so wanted their son and daughter back. Romeo and Juliet came back and had a real long wedding. The End.

How was it? Sorrie if the script didnt sound like the real one. Tell me what you think. :)